Showing posts with label Monsters. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Monsters. Show all posts

Wednesday, 12 October 2011

Erosion


Right. Finished that edit of Erosion. Now it's put away for a few weeks and then I'll revisit it, hopefully, please dear God, hopefully for the last time.
So, re-working the synopsis as I find those so difficult and continuing with Monster Belt. I'm glad. Looking at Erosion again, I can feel the characters of Monster Belt taking over and they can't, they're different. So it's a relief that I can put Erosion away for now.
And an image for Monster Belt. So much choice. What will it be? Goodbye Lizzie and Jez, hello Jane and Harris. Oh, and hello to the monster that lies in the crevices in everyone's head.

Thursday, 15 September 2011

The Monster Belt

Here's a first stab at the synopsis of Monster Belt:
There are caverns in everyone's head where monsters lurk. And there's a belt between two latitudes in the Northern Hemisphere where flesh and blood monsters exist.

Harris White needs to find the monster that killed his best friend over ten years ago. Two twelve year old boys, out boating as they did every day off the Balearic island of Formentera, drinking a couple of bottles of San Miguel, dive into the cool water. Jonah disappears and Harris stares into the large dark eye of the monster that has taken him.

Jane Clark lives in Hawksmoor, West Yorkshire, the central point of the Monster Belt and home to the annual Monster Convention. She dreams of being killed by large spiked hair curlers and strives to work in London. Fresh from university, the job market is bleak and she agrees to accompany Harris on his quest of the Belt.

What bonds them is the disappearance of a young boy in the local lake called The Mere. Legend has it that a monster lurks there; the Mere Monster. Jane doesn't believe in monsters, Harris believes that is all that makes up the world.

Harris grows increasingly preoccupied and frustrated that Jonah's killer will not show itself and unsettled by his withdrawal, Jane's inner demon can no longer be ignored. Bother their monsters are close to home but they are lodged where least expected.

Returning the following year to Hawksmoor for the next convention, the perpetual downpour floods the rivers which pour down into the Mere, saturating the marshland and as the water floods into the valley, cutting off the Bunkhouse Hotel where the convention visitors await rescue and Harris and Jane sit marooned on the roof, deciding whether or not to jump into the murky water and risk confronting the Mere Monster.

And the real test is how we confront the monster within.

Wednesday, 7 September 2011

Onwards


I know, I know, I keep saying I'm working on the final edit of Erosion, but this is the FINAL ONE. And so, at Writers' group, I've now read two chapters of Monster Belt out. Focus, focus, that wonderful word.
So, three hundred final pages of Erosion to plough through, holding concentration and the thread.
Monster Belt - well, it's written, but at 62,000 words, it's too short. I hate novels that are obviously padded, so need to start digging down to see what I can discover about Jane and Harris. Jane, fresh from university, believing in her own cynicism and Harris, a hippy child brought up on an island in the Med, is an expert where monsters are concerned.Jane dreams about being eaten by hair curlers in underground caves. She lives in a village that is at the central point of the two latitudes that form the Monster Belt. And in the village lake there lurks a monster that takes children's lives.
She's nothing to do all summer except work part-time in the village pub. Why shouldn't she go with Harris and find out if monsters really exist?